tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post6575849613534107229..comments2023-10-03T07:07:41.921-07:00Comments on Under The Door Frame: Peace, Be StillJerryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-84809979620957990652011-01-31T11:33:09.099-08:002011-01-31T11:33:09.099-08:00so many beautifu, powerful poems. i'm humbled ...so many beautifu, powerful poems. i'm humbled by the onestop poets. this one trouched me very deeply. thank you.iquanyinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13383272175223892567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-64190868470837508612011-01-30T19:43:09.978-08:002011-01-30T19:43:09.978-08:00so well structured and such beautiful image ..well...so well structured and such beautiful image ..well done.Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-72550523282717411242011-01-30T18:13:09.332-08:002011-01-30T18:13:09.332-08:00Stunning... beautiful imagery blossoming from grea...Stunning... beautiful imagery blossoming from great form... Nice!Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-34304285460539080082011-01-30T11:39:09.142-08:002011-01-30T11:39:09.142-08:00This is simply put, beautiful..
Beautiful words, l...This is simply put, beautiful..<br />Beautiful words, lines, intent..<br />Mind if I tag along here?<br /><br />(Love the name of your blog too!!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-52890079933056809842011-01-30T10:47:52.322-08:002011-01-30T10:47:52.322-08:00There is so much more love in the past met with sl...There is so much more love in the past met with slow disclosure, the gradual telling, the mystery shadows met with slow-spilling light. It would not be so sweet to know all at once, and if love be true...does the shape those shrinking shadows form really matter, standing bared before us in the pale light?<br /><br />Beautiful creation. The structure gives it a soft, easy flow that caresses us with your vision of love...so many can see loss, the disappearance in the sand, but you see footprints leading to romantic revelations...a sweet heart and a good pen you have, my friend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-54485648177899912412011-01-30T10:30:35.261-08:002011-01-30T10:30:35.261-08:00I see your heart...I see your heart...Barbaraliveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14057633672644837902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-81362090419597160622011-01-30T09:16:14.490-08:002011-01-30T09:16:14.490-08:00Wow Jerry! great piece.Wow Jerry! great piece.budh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-62061654551772063032011-01-30T08:44:58.064-08:002011-01-30T08:44:58.064-08:00Amen to that, a truly beautiful pieceAmen to that, a truly beautiful pieceKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-3826781755319645312011-01-30T07:49:13.410-08:002011-01-30T07:49:13.410-08:00Beautifully written and structured. The imagery is...Beautifully written and structured. The imagery is so sweet. I like the first verse better than any other, though each line conveys the magic of love.<br /><br />Thanks for your visit and lovely comment on my blog.<br /><br />Take care and keep smiling. =)Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-30275605336354420932011-01-30T06:52:31.540-08:002011-01-30T06:52:31.540-08:00the imagery, the structure, the phrases ~ i love e...the imagery, the structure, the phrases ~ i love everything about this. beautiful one shoot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-77781300660746012682011-01-30T06:40:54.211-08:002011-01-30T06:40:54.211-08:00i read it as well as a love poem, but maybe to one...i read it as well as a love poem, but maybe to one of your children? the past, forming them in a certain way and you pray for the wind to stop, so you can trace their steps? and that speaks of a lot of love<br /><br />btw i like your new blog layoutClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-72755922239701323512011-01-30T06:20:50.003-08:002011-01-30T06:20:50.003-08:00the hourglass foot sprinkling footprints...lovely ...the hourglass foot sprinkling footprints...lovely imagery man!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-22666878884196822392011-01-30T06:16:28.463-08:002011-01-30T06:16:28.463-08:00I also read it as a love poem. One with an interes...I also read it as a love poem. One with an interesting uniformity in structure yet very free and revealing emotionally. "that hourglass figure<br />trickled sand in foot shaped" great imagery in that line. Smooth sound overall too. Great work, Jerry.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8298853097456839919.post-73402141200984388432011-01-30T06:06:56.582-08:002011-01-30T06:06:56.582-08:00Beautiful, Jerry. You took the photo as a kind of ...Beautiful, Jerry. You took the photo as a kind of love poem.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.com