Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Healing for One Word at a Time ...blog carnival

Heal

I see another’s feelings.
To put words to their pain
gives them a voice and
a place to set their tears.
It would be a place
between our loves.
A place to look until
the mist of our eyes lifts
and we can see each other.
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4 comments:

  1. Shashidhar SharmaOctober 6, 2010 at 12:42 AM

    Beautiful.. I loved the last two lines... as the mist of our eyes lifts...
    Its lovely.

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    Om Namah Shivaya
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  2. dustusOctober 6, 2010 at 5:59 AM

    I second Shashi... beautiful poem with a wonderful ending. Nice One Shot!

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  3. ClaudiaOctober 6, 2010 at 9:10 AM

    yes - sometimes there is a mist that has to lift first before we can see each other..beautifully expressed

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  4. Duane ScottOctober 6, 2010 at 4:24 PM

    A place to look until the mist of our eyes lifts... and we can see each other.

    I loved this post.

    Beautiful!

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