a hand out to
dance hip-hop
in a German pub
with old men at their
stations leaning
into a very dark beer
and smoke started
its movement with ours
I flipped a guy’s hat off
while bumping my
frualine into a chair
we flipped the air
and all the old men
did was stare
This week on my word of the day e-mails was German words ...here's another.
Stop by Mr. Knowitalls blog and try a 55.
flipped the air...nice...i like the feel of the scene...and let them stare...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThis is a creation inspired from a word of the day email? Very cool. You create a vivid scene in 55 based on an unlikely prompt!
ReplyDeleteAcht du Lieber!!!
ReplyDeleteLoved your 55 Jerry.
It puts us in the proper weltenschaang!
Thanks for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
wow.
ReplyDeletedancing words.
well constructed.
You had me at "dark beer" Jerry! Wünderbar!
ReplyDeletenice - now Schwärmerei means when someone thinks that someone else is absolutely nice and is a little bit in love - but only a little bit...
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