Plethora of poetry, pinches of essay, dash of memoir.
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
Shhhhh....For Talon
I have less to say,
But more desire to say it.
I'll walk on discarding words.
They tumble like rocks
in a brain tumbler.
Polish, buff, caress
a few gems.
In the beginning
was
a
word.
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I really like this one. And its brevity nicely reveals its meaning too.
ReplyDeletelol! This was brilliant, Jerry! I love the idea of the tumbling words being polished. Just wonderful writing!
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this is lovely - is this for "our" Talon..? did you tell her..i'm sure she will love it..
ReplyDeleteThat explains that grinding sound in my head - LOL! Nice one, Jerry!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely. Its impact is enhanced by its length.
ReplyDeletesmart you,
ReplyDeletefabulous piece for Talon.
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ReplyDeleteHappy Halloween to you. Our Halloween potluck is open,
Post a poem on Halloween, or share an old poem unrelated to the theme, link in. that’s how you get the best result of feedback.
Feel free to take any awards from this post, enjoy!
xxx