we stood together
almost silently
with mutual awe
for the celestial
apparition
pointing with
guiding words
of wonder as
the glowing curtain
danced and skipped
in the northern sky
like a nervous ghost
its translucent
evening gown
tucked and furled
in the folds of
the wind
we stood together
straining to see
the mystery
of us
for my son Nathan
It's almost inevitable - we ponder the heavens - and then marvel at the mystery that is mankind. Nice one, Jerry.
ReplyDeleteVery nice indeed! - nervous ghost- great image!
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Natures Easel...
ReplyDeletebeautiful and a beautiful vision to behold...your son will never forget the moments together in awe....bkm
ReplyDeleteand hopefully it is a mystery that you plumb for years to come...
ReplyDelete..the translucent evening gown..so beautifully described jerry - and a precious moment with your son - did you read the poem to him..?
ReplyDeleteThere is nothing like the northern lights...they transport you. You captured their essence brilliantly, Jerry.
ReplyDeleteAmazing description in the third stanza that struck me—nervous ghost attending a ball—what a way to look at it! Though even better to share it with your son :) Great One Shot, Jerry!
ReplyDeleteHats off Jerry..this one is an outstanding beauty!
ReplyDeletei must say i am impressed with your bio too..sounds like you are a real human being with a very kind heart.cheers to you and Merry Christmas to you and your lovely family..:)
Lovely
ReplyDeleteYou've shared a wonderful moment not only with your son but with us all. Delightful One Shot, Jerry!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant descriptions of an amazing phenomenom and your reflections on the wonder of us.
ReplyDeleteMy one shot: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/on-reading-a-poem-for-poetry-potluck-and-monday-morning-writing-prompt/
And there is always much beauty to behold
ReplyDeleteRemarkable piece Jerry
Please stay safe as I know the winter has hit you folks hard
We appreciate your being part of us; like family we are glad you are here even during this busy time
Happiest of holidays for your family
Moonie smiles
It is fair to say that the seeing of those dancing lights if you can let them lead you at the least learn a bit more about yourself and them who dance with you.
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