Sunday, December 5, 2010

Silent Sight....For One Shoot Sunday


eyelashes brush the incense
and stir into spaces
between
senses
sight
silent
as night
and blur into faces
skin brushes the intent
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16 comments:

  1. Anita MagdalenaDecember 5, 2010 at 8:04 AM

    Love the imagery and expression in your words.

    Anita.

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  2. dustusDecember 5, 2010 at 8:22 AM

    Your style on this one lends to it a breathless quality from the one and two-word lines that work so well with the imagery.

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  3. ClaudiaDecember 5, 2010 at 8:44 AM

    this was beautiul - senses sight silent as night - wow - peacefully sensual

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  4. Helena MalheurDecember 5, 2010 at 8:49 AM

    beautiful imagery here -- your use of language is wonderful

    "incense" & "senses"
    "stir into spaces" & "blur into faces"

    -- quite clever! love it!

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  5. TALONDecember 5, 2010 at 9:23 AM

    Beautiful...

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  6. hedgewitchDecember 5, 2010 at 9:45 AM

    And a fine light touch brushing out the ink-drawing of this poem. Sensual and intellectual imagery both, the best kind.

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  7. Louise GallagherDecember 5, 2010 at 9:53 AM

    you do deftly brush the inky depths of this photo with your words.

    nice one!

    LouiseG

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  8. batsickDecember 5, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    Cool! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.html

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  9. ReflectionsDecember 5, 2010 at 10:22 AM

    Your imagery brushes lightly across the senses, feeling the depths of the photo. Well done.

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  10. WysteriaDecember 5, 2010 at 10:25 AM

    Short but so beautifully written. Great write for the prompt

    Wysteria

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  11. AnonymousDecember 5, 2010 at 11:22 AM

    Skin brushes the intent. Beautifully penned...now I really do need a fan...

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  12. Desert RoseDecember 5, 2010 at 12:12 PM

    Mesmerizing!
    Powerful imagery,deep and touchy!
    WOW..:)

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  13. FireblossomDecember 5, 2010 at 1:32 PM

    A sibilant effort indeed. The repeated sounds make it a little hypnotic.

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  14. GlynnDecember 5, 2010 at 3:10 PM

    "...skin brushes the intent." That is a great line, Jerry. Good poem.

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  15. AnonymousDecember 5, 2010 at 7:24 PM

    i like the touch of it
    the feel of eyelashes
    such a soft touch yet noticed
    and the way the words sound and flow
    well done

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  16. AnonymousDecember 5, 2010 at 10:29 PM

    held with touch of beauty ,that floats within

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