Plethora of poetry, pinches of essay, dash of memoir.
Love the imagery and expression in your words.Anita.
Your style on this one lends to it a breathless quality from the one and two-word lines that work so well with the imagery.
this was beautiul - senses sight silent as night - wow - peacefully sensual
beautiful imagery here -- your use of language is wonderful"incense" & "senses" "stir into spaces" & "blur into faces" -- quite clever! love it!
And a fine light touch brushing out the ink-drawing of this poem. Sensual and intellectual imagery both, the best kind.
you do deftly brush the inky depths of this photo with your words.nice one!LouiseG
Cool! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.html
Your imagery brushes lightly across the senses, feeling the depths of the photo. Well done.
Short but so beautifully written. Great write for the promptWysteria
Skin brushes the intent. Beautifully penned...now I really do need a fan...
Mesmerizing!Powerful imagery,deep and touchy!WOW..:)
A sibilant effort indeed. The repeated sounds make it a little hypnotic.
"...skin brushes the intent." That is a great line, Jerry. Good poem.
i like the touch of itthe feel of eyelashessuch a soft touch yet noticedand the way the words sound and flowwell done
held with touch of beauty ,that floats within
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