Plethora of poetry, pinches of essay, dash of memoir.
Jerry...I really liked the style of your contribution.Excellent 55, and very Romantic!I hope you found this to be creative, challenging, and FUN!Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
becoming we and us....that is a very good prize at the bottom of the cereal box...love your early rhyme scheme...some good off beats.
Woke up in the night and thought of a change up for the end of this 55. (Brian)G-Man...are you from Michigan originally? KAWE
I like the evolution in this poem. A really neat 55!
..become us and we..nice one!
I liked the "gray grey grae" triad and the ending:"I can prayyou and me become us and we"Nice 55!
I think this is my first time here to your blog. Very nice 55. I too love the "you and me become us and we". Beautiful.Mine is up.PG
uplifting and fun 55.cool reading!
So, you made a little time to stop by. You are welcome any time...speak freely.