Monday, December 6, 2010

Dream Not.....For Jingle Poetry






Dream Not

I dream of reality,
a R.E.M.embrance
of when I am
presently awake.
Not moving my
eyes in front of you,
but heavy lids
propped up
by your story.
Your joy and pain
sleepy rain
running down
my cheeks.
My reality becomes
a dream with you of
moments of
wide
awake.
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 6, 2010 at 8:17 AM

    lovely! here's mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/

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  2. TALONDecember 6, 2010 at 9:21 AM

    I love how dreams and reality blended, Jerry...the last lines are like a testament to true love.

    My potluck: so maybe

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 6, 2010 at 9:28 AM

    what a cute surprise...
    Thanks for sharing your talent with JP..

    A+

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  4. AnonymousDecember 6, 2010 at 1:34 PM

    You've caught that connection between story teller and listener for me.

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  5. ReflectionsDecember 6, 2010 at 9:59 PM

    Blending moments, be they dreams or reveries... fun surprises still await.

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  6. AnonymousDecember 7, 2010 at 9:12 AM

    wise words, well put.
    keep it up.
    :)

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  7. DeLiDecember 8, 2010 at 1:31 AM

    i think i am always in the dreamland....that joy and pain moment then reality...

    and isnt it so sweet to have that dream gives us a lot of possibility to hope and go on?

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 9, 2010 at 9:37 AM

    you truly impressed me ..

    sleepy rain ...love the imagery here.
    masterful poetry, elegant sentiments...
    keep the brilliance coming...

    Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!

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