Thursday, December 16, 2010

For Whom the Bells Toll...a sequel for Flash 55

The jingles faded
off into the eastern distance.
He snuffed the roasting  chestnuts
and left his paper on the
coffee table.
With card in hand
and boots buckled
he dashed like dancer
to the box and put the flag up.
He turned to find Donner
filing his rack with a flint….
and no jingle bells.


  1. Must be with Blitzen!
    Have a very Happy Holliday Jerry and family!
    Loved your 55
    Thank You for your support.Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End!

  2. lol! These reindeer are tricky creatures! I loved it, Jerry!

  3. Oh oh!!!! Maybe you'd better 'watch out'!!!

    My Flash 55 is posted Scroll down below my show n tell for Friday to find it.

    Have a great weekend.

  4. That Donner- my, my, Have a great week! thanks-

  5. Oh, darn, the bell did not toll for thee.

  6. you can never be to careful with reindeer I've heard

    Thanks Jerry for your writing and fun this year

    Happiest of Holidays to you

  7. I thought "he dashed like dancer" was brilliant!

  8. well,
    the dancing feet are enough to tickle your belly...
    Happy Holidays!
    Stay Blessed.

  9. ha - nice - i loved it - always a smile waiting on your site - nice

  10. End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! xxx

    keep up the excellence,

    link a poem to our potluck tomorrow, give us the cheers to continue...

  11. What, no jingle bells? It's just not Christmas without them :)


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