Friday, January 28, 2011

Bad Ire Day...for FFF....join the crew today! It's a hoot.

Don’t take that poetic tone with me!
Put that metaphor down and back away slowly.
A little less alliteration, leave letters lie.
About those similes, they are like, like, like…identical twins.
Don’t talk to me in meters and rhyme,
I’m not in the mood, out of time.
Give it straight,
because I have a headache.
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11 comments:

  1. izzyJanuary 28, 2011 at 5:20 AM

    No indecision there! very clear-
    'leave the letters lie' is great, thanks!

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  2. BubbaJanuary 28, 2011 at 5:22 AM

    One of the most clever 55's I've ever read!

    Nice job, Jerry!

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  3. Brian MillerJanuary 28, 2011 at 6:28 AM

    haha this is briliant...i can see being held up with a metaphor...lol

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  4. ClaudiaJanuary 28, 2011 at 10:19 AM

    jerry...i LOVE your 55 - you rock the place - ha!

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  5. SYJanuary 28, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    this is fantastic loved it..truly unique

    - SY

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  6. Belinda MunozJanuary 28, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    LOVE this! Very clever!

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  7. hedgewitchJanuary 28, 2011 at 4:27 PM

    It does get old some days, doesn't it?

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  8. G-ManJanuary 28, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    You sound like an angry college professor!!
    But it was Most Excellent!!
    Loved your 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

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  9. kolemboJanuary 29, 2011 at 12:32 AM

    Gorgeous! A little less alliteration! ha!

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  10. tattytiaraJanuary 29, 2011 at 4:20 PM

    Oh clever - that was fun.

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  11. RavenJanuary 29, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    How very bright and witty...(aka clever) Enjoyed it immensely.

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