Friday, March 4, 2011

Schwarmerei

a hand out to
dance hip-hop
in a German pub
with old men at their
stations leaning
into a very dark beer
and smoke started
its movement  with ours
I flipped a guy’s hat off
while bumping my
frualine into a chair
we flipped the air
and all the old men
did was stare

This week on my word of the day e-mails was German words ...here's another.
Stop by Mr. Knowitalls blog and try a 55. 

6 comments:

  1. flipped the air...nice...i like the feel of the scene...and let them stare...smiles.

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  2. This is a creation inspired from a word of the day email? Very cool. You create a vivid scene in 55 based on an unlikely prompt!

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  3. Acht du Lieber!!!
    Loved your 55 Jerry.
    It puts us in the proper weltenschaang!
    Thanks for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  4. wow.
    dancing words.
    well constructed.

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  5. You had me at "dark beer" Jerry! Wünderbar!

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  6. nice - now Schwärmerei means when someone thinks that someone else is absolutely nice and is a little bit in love - but only a little bit...

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