Saturday, September 25, 2010

Luci's Shawl

Luci’s Shawl

Prayers of thanks as I wrap
the wholly crocheted words
around me. 

It’s cool in this writer’s
cave under the stairs.

Your tight and lose knots
rest easy on my cold shoulders.

It was back on May twentieth,
early in the morning that I
was invited into moving
words with needle swords.

You wield the points together,
changing the colors as needed
until floats cascade down
in mischief on the underside.

Then flashing would rise like an
Easter morning as you knot and
unknot the fibers of vocabulary.

Any time I can pull out a poem
of yours like a loose thread and
it unravels me. 

Thanks Glynn for the link to the review of harvesting fog.  I can't help myself, so here is another one I wrote a while ago to celebrate Luci's gifts to me.








3 comments:

  1. Prayers of thanks as I wrap
    the wholly crocheted words
    around me. ...
    lots of beautiful words in your poem - enjoyed the read (and good choice with the new lay out)

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  2. thanks...Luci is my number one...I thought this layout was easier on the eyes. Peace.

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  3. knot and unknot the fibers of vocabularies...

    wow,
    how apt to apply words like this.
    beautiful poem.

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