Sea, what you say,
come with me,
let’s go play again.
I’m under your tow,
come on please
let me go again.
Oh, tip up your tide
let’s take a quick ride again.
Break on my turf,
take me out,
let me surf again.
Sea what you wave,
curl ‘round me
tube like a cave again.
kowabunga dude...again. smiles. a little more than surfing in thsi 55?
ReplyDeleteterrific rhythm that lends nicely. surf's up!
ReplyDeleteYou had me right up to shave. Then suddenly my mind went to commercial.
ReplyDeleteI see a barrel surf! Fun rhythmic 55.
ReplyDeleteFound my self floating and bobbing up and down with the lyrical rhythm.of this verse.
ReplyDeletenice 55er,
joanny
I love the powerful format and the simplicity of the words.
ReplyDeleteMade me wish for the summer and I love the winter! Nice write.
ReplyDeleteSpiderman's Ride is my 55 this week.
I loved the use of "again" - it just put me right at the sea. Lovely!
ReplyDelete(I hear Teletubbies chanting: "Again! Again!")
ReplyDeleteNice 'flow' to this 55, Jerry.
unfortunately i can't surf the sea - only the internet...
ReplyDeleteSurf's up! I heard the Beach boys singing in the background. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteI've never surfed, but love the ocean. In fact, I will be spending my thanksgiving at the beach!
ReplyDeleteHang 10 or should i say 55!!
great rhythm with the surf - makes me want to get the board out
ReplyDeletenice 55
Happy Weekend - stay dry
You make surfing sound like a sensuous experience :)
ReplyDeleteHey this almost sounds like song lyrics, roll me rock me all night long, etc. fun 55. I think if you'll take advice, change your blog information section to read "gardening" instead of "yardwork" Hahaha.
ReplyDeletehave a good weekend.
my 55 is up for all my poet friends, HERE
Dianne
musical 55.
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