Thursday, November 11, 2010

Surf's Up...For Friday Flash 55

Sea, what you say,
come with me,
let’s go play              again.

I’m under your tow,
come on please
let me go                  again.

Oh, tip up your tide
let’s take a quick ride          again.

Break on my turf,
take me out,
let me surf               again.

Sea what you wave,
curl ‘round me
tube like a cave       again.

16 comments:

  1. kowabunga dude...again. smiles. a little more than surfing in thsi 55?

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  2. terrific rhythm that lends nicely. surf's up!

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  3. You had me right up to shave. Then suddenly my mind went to commercial.

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  4. I see a barrel surf! Fun rhythmic 55.

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  5. Found my self floating and bobbing up and down with the lyrical rhythm.of this verse.

    nice 55er,
    joanny

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  6. I love the powerful format and the simplicity of the words.

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  7. Made me wish for the summer and I love the winter! Nice write.

    Spiderman's Ride is my 55 this week.

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  8. I loved the use of "again" - it just put me right at the sea. Lovely!

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  9. (I hear Teletubbies chanting: "Again! Again!")

    Nice 'flow' to this 55, Jerry.

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  10. unfortunately i can't surf the sea - only the internet...

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  11. Surf's up! I heard the Beach boys singing in the background. Nice one.

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  12. I've never surfed, but love the ocean. In fact, I will be spending my thanksgiving at the beach!
    Hang 10 or should i say 55!!

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  13. great rhythm with the surf - makes me want to get the board out

    nice 55
    Happy Weekend - stay dry

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  14. You make surfing sound like a sensuous experience :)

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  15. Hey this almost sounds like song lyrics, roll me rock me all night long, etc. fun 55. I think if you'll take advice, change your blog information section to read "gardening" instead of "yardwork" Hahaha.
    have a good weekend.
    my 55 is up for all my poet friends, HERE
    Dianne

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